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Eye...      [GP4]   [359 hits]   [Version: 1]   [Id: 105011]
Artist: Open Competition Aug/Sep 2008
File Size: 82.6 KB     Number of Tracks: 7
Submitted by: RumpyTheRubbuhChikin  (All tabs)  on 17 Sep 2008 04:00, commenting:
JazzDeath on drums
Validated by blackiel on 17 Sep 2008 14:12


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You've stated that frustration (or I took it that way) was one of the main concepts 'behind the scenes'. Is frustration dissonant, like a tritone between happiness and anger? The tune indeed sounds frustrated as hell and I hope writing it brought You at least minimal relief. The problem is - I felt already tired after first 60 bars and it wasn't the end... I can uprate the song for its prohealth values but it would still be...

Rating: 3 stars

... for a weak effort. Considering Ur other works and amount of time it took You to finish it's really, really disappointg and that's a shame. Hope You got rid of this frustration anyway! :D

Posted by topti  {{ 1 tabs / 0 corrections }}  on: 17 Sep 2008 16:59

Rated as: Unrated
Damn this song is killer! But why part III smack in the middle, it sounds so gay. Everything around that part slays!

Posted by Hugo  {{ 52 tabs / 0 corrections }}  on: 17 Sep 2008 21:16

Rated as: 
Why Christopher from Poland, with suffiecent spelling, why?
This song is nowhere near your usuall excellency. There's too much disharmonies/distortion in this song to make it a Rumpy-song of approval. I don't know what really made me dislike it, but whatever IT was, it ruined the whole song. Don't get me all wrong here, I liked some parts, but the main impression after listen after listen is, WHY?!
There is some truly perfect parts, but the in-betweens just makes me wanna travel down to Poland (to meet with the extended family) and make you remake 'em, asap, or else...

But to be honest, this song is quite okay, I guess (for the genre), but without vocals it is simply impossible to get the picture clear, or the score understandable to speak more musican-like.

Posted by Generis Humani  {{ 53 tabs / 0 corrections }}  on: 20 Sep 2008 15:47

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the whole song gots a lot of very inspired moments

there are some leads that didn't lead anywhere spread all over the song anyway...
part III wasn't that gay, but I say transition for part IV is more speakabily gay
even though part IV gots its good moments indeed

and that

oh.. and the intro seemt exciting to me ;)

3 stars

Posted by stockle  {{ 15 tabs / 0 corrections }}  on: 20 Sep 2008 20:34

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Mr. Kryzttmahadsifoaisdfoisadfphere you made me listen to your song more than 6 times just to get a correct impresion of it, cause I had no words to write down after I heard it for the first time, so here is my impression:

- Awesome Intro, very earie
- Bars 41 & 42 were good
- Part 2 was killer, specially from bar 66 to 111, lol xD
- Part 3 by itself is so nice, but it really didn't fit at all with what (I guess) you were trying to transmit.
- Part 4 sounds like a mixture between part 3 and the rest of the song, that's good cause it made your song flow and somehow made it finish in something concrete and not a bunch of random crazy riffs.

Good song
I'll give you 4

Posted by Daslaf  {{ 22 tabs / 0 corrections }}  on: 29 Sep 2008 20:17

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I think this is probably one of your best songs. What I love about your music is how sincere it sounds. Whether its aggression or sadness, you project it excellently. The 6/8 part is a perfectly twisted hook. All parts fit together as a whole, and I think the way the clean guitar connects the last 6/8 ‘chorus’ with part three is excellent. All in all, simplicity at its best.

The only negative thing for me is the presence of repetitiveness which sadly is something you seem to struggle with at times. Although not the end of the world, I would like to see a little more variation. And when I talk about repetition for example look at the beginning of part 4… 4 bars and then 6 bars where each bar is the same besides the drums. Small variations here would add a lot to the lasting impression. Also the small solo fills scattered around I don’t really understand, but they don’t really detract so much from the overall impression to me. Still I’m wondering why they’re there.

Regardless, this is excellent. I think you grew on this one.

Posted by Beckkill  {{ 11 tabs / 0 corrections }}  on: 11 Oct 2008 14:17

Rated as: Unrated
I liked this song. The first part really shoved it down the throat of its listeners. The percussion is good; the riffs are good and the 6|8 section was superb and perfectly timed. I loved the lead at bar 50. Part Two started out quiet but again it smacked you in the mouth, especially the 7|8 section. Part Three, although great sounding and a lovely lead, was tame and seemed to be a misfit to the overall song. Part Four got back into the heavy stuff again, which I liked. Outro was beautiful. Weird guitar tunings - what tuning is it? Nice job overall.

Posted by blackiel  {{ 0 tabs / 0 corrections }}  on: 14 Oct 2008 14:54

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With RSE I hated it without it I liked, like a noob I didn't listen to it with out RSE till now so, I personal apologies for the low score I gave you. There are a lot good ideas and sounds in this song. Intro was great, I like part two, part three was my favorite. You have a talent for changing moods and getting the listener involved. Once again i'm sorry about the low score. You said you wanted feedback so I'm giving you honest feedback. For what its worth this is I really think of the song.

Posted by daniel9388  {{ 33 tabs / 0 corrections }}  on: 15 Oct 2008 18:04

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Well, it's been a while since you wrote down this stuff and I heard it for the first time. You know, these last days have been the rougher I've ever lived, I'm feeling down like hell... but hey!! Depression and sadness are my biggest inspirations. Anyway, why I'm writing down this??Cause a couple of days ago I was wandering on your myspace and I listened to this song... and the whole conception i had of this stuff changed in so many ways!!!

This song is amazing!!! Straight to the point, excelent structure and it has been a completely soundtrack for my life these days!!!

Couldn't catch you on IM but I had to tell you this anyway

Thanks for this magnificant song you composed Rumpy

Posted by Daslaf  {{ 22 tabs / 0 corrections }}  on: 20 Mar 2009 19:42

Rated as: Unrated
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